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If i was all alone.

If i was all alone,
i would look up in the sky,
by the moonlight, thinking,
will there be someone else just for me?

The moon and the stars shines upon me.
as i walk home,
there was a lovable voice coming towards me.
a lonely boy.

as were together,
the unforgettable memories will always be in our hearts......
FOR ETERNITY!

but he was gone!
could it have been a dream?
there was a tear drop on my cheek.
the memories i had with him still made me depressed
so it was a dream..........
''goodbye my beloved. i guess its better off as a dream.....''

That night,
the wind blows through my window.
the boy appears,
he spoke, trying to exceed his words.
the tears fell from eyes.
i know the truth already.

from that on,
i closed my eyes
never to wake up again
this poem is the best poem i wrote in my whole life!
i feel embarrassed ....... :blush:
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Nenyeh Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2007  Student Writer
That was awsome :D
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kdjshgoa Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2007  Hobbyist Artist
thx! :glomp:
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Nenyeh Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2007  Student Writer
:D welcome! :hug:
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Andorea-Chan Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2007  Professional Filmographer
It's a little sad but very sweet. I like it. ^_^
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kdjshgoa Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2007  Hobbyist Artist
THX! :hug:
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UmiHoshi Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2007  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
so beautiful, yet so depressing -.- *aplause*
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kdjshgoa Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2007  Hobbyist Artist
thank you! :hug: its true its sad :(
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UmiHoshi Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2007  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
keep all the knives in your house away from yourself ok? ^~^
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kdjshgoa Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2007  Hobbyist Artist
i will. thx for the caution :)
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UmiHoshi Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2007  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
ow and sleeping pils too!
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kdjshgoa Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2007  Hobbyist Artist
i dont take drugs ^^; but ill be careful
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UmiHoshi Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2007  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
good^^ *takes some rope just to be sure*
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kdjshgoa Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2007  Hobbyist Artist
:evillaugh:
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kdjshgoa Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2007  Hobbyist Artist
:evillaugh:
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MoogleGurl Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2007  Professional Artisan Crafter
So sweet <3 I like it very much ^-^ thank you for the note
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kdjshgoa Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2007  Hobbyist Artist
thank you for the favs and your comment.
and your very welcome im very glad you like it :)
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kdjshgoa Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2007  Hobbyist Artist
thank you! thx for the fav
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ReaperClamp Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2007  Student Artist
IT's awesome man!
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Proto165 Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2007
Nicely done! Totally from the soul! ^_^
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kdjshgoa Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2007  Hobbyist Artist
thank you!!! :D :hug:
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kdjshgoa Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2007  Hobbyist Artist
thank you.
i really am still feel embarrassed because i wrote something romantic.
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keybluekyn Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2007
Hehe! No need to feel embarrassed, sweetness! It's really nice. Thank you for Noting me with it!
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